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The Silence

And as she gazed down upon the writhing creatures below, the very thought she had so strongly opposed, for a split second, was her own. "Would it really be such a bad thing, to toss a boulder off this wall? To be the one who stopped the suffering? To finally put an end to it all? The pestilence, the poverty, The larceny, the lying, The mourning, the misery, The destitution, the dying. Would it really be such a bad thing, to toss a boulder off this wall? To be the one who stopped the crying? To be the one to end it all? The pain, the profligacy The rape, the rotting, The vindictive, the vulgarity The sorrow, the suffering Would it really be such a bad thing, to toss a boulder off this wall? To watch in horror knowing, I was the one to end it all... The candor, the complexity, The laughter, the loving, The smiles, the sincerity, The life, the living. Would it really be such a bad thing, to toss a boulder off this wall? To watch in horror knowing... I was the one who let it fall... To be the one to create The Silence..."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Sarafiel. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sarafiel. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congrats on "The Silence" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:47:00 AM
Very thought provoking - I can relate to this!
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:50:00 AM
My mother answered my questions saying only, "Always let your consicious be your guide and you'll never go wrong"...I enjoyed your poetry with such depth. Thank you...
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:03:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarafiel. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/3/2011 5:22:00 PM
I love this piece...I feel your pain in it and I also moan and groan over the state of things in the world...Too bad people don't just appreciate the life we have right now and learn to enjoy what's left of it.
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