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The Sign of Love and Pain

Flower is sign of love, purity, beauty
What is human for?
The sign of pain
In every line, every line,

I have seen her and him,
Leaders and subordinators
Each expresses ownself
No one comes in others help .......

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2017 9:16:00 AM

This is wonderful. The blue rose is also an excellent caption which drags the attention of curious minds like mine Welcome to poetry soup friend. This is a job well done

Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/2/2016 10:36:00 AM

Though vague, one is still able to capture the message - its disturbing among humans right now.

G. Jay

Date: 10/14/2016 4:56:00 PM

I love the name Blue Rose.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/27/2016 10:17:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 3:09:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Blue Rose. :)

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 2:55:00 PM

Blue so true, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2016 3:24:00 PM

Every rose has its thorns Blue - welcome to soup - i enjoyed reading your first poem:-) hugs jan xx

Blue Rose
Date: 9/25/2016 1:17:00 PM

Thank you for your nice comments

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2016 11:39:00 AM

Interesting abc form, Blue rose, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Blue Rose
Date: 9/25/2016 1:19:00 PM

Thanks a lot, for your great suggestions

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/23/2016 7:03:00 AM

Right ... Pain in lanes and bye lanes ... All man-made grains ... of exploitation ... in every nation ... painful lesion ...

Jill Spagnola

Date: 9/23/2016 5:38:00 AM

Blue, I love depth of your work..I feel the pain within the comparison you used in your succint piece....Pain lies on the riverside for all, but without the pain I couldn't appreciate the joy of my journey!!I dig your words :)...peace & light, jill

Blue Rose
Date: 9/23/2016 5:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot, jill for your wise comments