The Shy Moon

Bandit behind branches
thick with leaves
the shy moon
conceals its light
A thief in the night...
Now perched high in the sky
It winks its eye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 2:19 AM
G'day Gershon … has the feel of a Halloween like experience Gershon - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 10:33 AM
There you go, Lindsay. And I see that Halloween's just around the corner too. Thanks, Gershon
May Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 12:42 PM
I love this one, good Job Gershon!! Sandra is right your vision is unique!
Wolf Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Bobby, you (and Sandra) are just too kind. Very nice of you to comment this way. Cheers, Gershon
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 12:20 PM
love this vision you penned in this one...unique and beautiful visual my friend :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:09 PM
You are too kind, Sandra. Thank you for all of the encouragement. Best wishes, Gershon
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