The Shot of the Day

Look at the picture in the frame I am holding
I have caught a memory,  and it is now unfolding
Walking through the wood my camera in my hand
I look around this very green and pleasant land.

A camera over my shoulder, a flask with something hot
I have them the wrong way round I nearly miss my shot.
In the distance a baby deer is hiding behind a fallen log
I am on my guard I dare not move, but I really want to jog

The mist rolls by, I see his ears they move barely a whisper
I crouch down low camera to eye, a cloth to wipe the mist off
A red toadstool is by the log I cannot believe my luck
It’s like a fairytale picture that you could see in a story book
I focus very cautiously and zoom in on my prey
The mist clears the deer’s head pops up and I have the picture of the day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 17, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Dear Mandy, Wow I wish YOU lived Closer I have an Albino deer that has shown up in my backyard the last 3 years Bring YOUR camera I'll make the tea LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege ...Harry
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September 26, 2012 at 4:20 PM
well if this wasn't written by a wonderful caring poet, i'm a dutchman... Mandy what you write still amazes me, your poems come across so vivid, just like making a picture in one's mind....
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November 13, 2011 at 11:13 AM
A wonderful write Mandy so vivid with description! I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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November 13, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Thanks Caryl x
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