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The Shot

as jamal was walking with his bandana that was blue he had an awesome outfit with some tight matching shoes as the boys who thought they were gangstas drove by he seen them in the corner of his eye as he slowly turned they pulled out thier guns the bulletts went straight for his chest he fell to the ground but didnt cry as the doctors rushed him in they removed the bulletts as fast as can be he then woke up to see it was all just a dream

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Date: 2/1/2012 6:33:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Amanda. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 1:29:00 PM
what a dream
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