The Shot

as jamal was walking
with his bandana that was blue
he had an awesome outfit 
with some tight matching shoes
as the boys who thought they were gangstas drove by
he seen them in the corner of his eye
as he slowly turned they pulled out thier guns
the bulletts went straight for his chest
he fell to the ground but didnt cry
as the doctors rushed him in they removed the bulletts
as fast as can be
he then woke up to see it was all just a dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 2/1/2012 6:33:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Amanda. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 1:29:00 PM
what a dream
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