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"the Shore"

Grains of sand wash up between my toes, and they stay till the tide comes in.

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James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 1:15:00 PM

Like Alyssa mentions, the feeling of sand between ones toes. It's as if your sifting every soul who has walked the earth and meeting them all. Another delightful Haiku Micahel >> James

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/13/2010 4:58:00 AM

I love the way how you awakened my senses through your poems...you're a gift,,,^_^ v

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/12/2010 6:06:00 PM

Very true sketch of the grains of sand which often stay. Lovely Haiku. Love and Best wishes..Ravindra.......Michael J Falotico.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2010 4:03:00 PM

So many times I have watched this too Michael.. its a lovely sight and great feel on the tootsies.. enjoyed another creative piece from u W.K. with luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/11/2010 8:59:00 PM

Nice one....I would love to be there, and feel the sand between my toes! :)

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/11/2010 8:18:00 PM

love to contemplate in moments such as that one, you know this could just be a happening, but could have meaning of something else which it makes it more, great haiku favs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2010 7:18:00 PM

Very meaning haiku, Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/11/2010 4:37:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Michael. I can feel it now! Wish the tide could wash all our troubles away. Love, Carolyn