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"the Shore"

Grains of sand wash up
        between my toes, and they stay 
                                till the tide comes in.

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James Fraser

August 23, 2010 at 1:15 PM

Like Alyssa mentions, the feeling of sand between ones toes. It's as if your sifting every soul who has walked the earth and meeting them all. Another delightful Haiku Micahel >> James

Juan Paolo Galua

August 13, 2010 at 4:58 AM

I love the way how you awakened my senses through your poems...you're a gift,,,^_^ v

Ravindra K Kapoor

August 12, 2010 at 6:06 PM

Very true sketch of the grains of sand which often stay. Lovely Haiku. Love and Best wishes..Ravindra.......Michael J Falotico.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 12, 2010 at 4:03 PM

So many times I have watched this too Michael.. its a lovely sight and great feel on the tootsies.. enjoyed another creative piece from u W.K. with luv..

Carrie Richards

August 11, 2010 at 8:59 PM

Nice one....I would love to be there, and feel the sand between my toes! :)

Jessica Arteaga

August 11, 2010 at 8:18 PM

love to contemplate in moments such as that one, you know this could just be a happening, but could have meaning of something else which it makes it more, great haiku favs