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The Shell

The shell in the sea
glowing brightly in the waves 
reaching for the sand
tumbling over and over 
begging for a bit of peace.

8/4/14

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Date: 8/19/2014 7:58:00 PM
Those lovely shells say so much to us. Congratulations, Melanie, on a beautiful poem and win.
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Date: 8/18/2014 5:22:00 AM
Very short and sweet, saying much more, Melanie. comgrats
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Date: 8/18/2014 1:20:00 AM
applause to you,melani!
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:17:00 PM
Melani, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:29:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:04:00 PM
I rarely see a tanka done this well, Melani. that is why I enjoy the form so much. You say so much inside the small shell of form that encapsulates your lovely words! Congrats for your well deserved win in my contest.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:04:00 PM
How great the shells point of view! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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