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The Shell

sea's sound in the breeze captured in a pretty shell. . . . nature's gift to me lying on my bed holding music to my ear. . . . I drift out to sea For Brian Strand's VERSE any theme/form max of 8 lines Poetry Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:34:00 PM

don't drift to far

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:30:00 PM

LOL,,,,,,, LOVE IT... WHAT KIND OF DREAM WAS IT...HOPE YOU DON'T SINK...SKAT

Olivia Brag

Date: 4/27/2014 7:47:00 PM

really cool poem

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/2/2011 6:27:00 PM

Fine write,Andrea.Congrats on your win.....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/30/2011 7:53:00 PM

water is soothing! Congrad's Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 9/30/2011 6:44:00 PM

Well done baba top the tree, like an angel there i see, great verse it comes by you, congratulations on it too...

Kash Poet

Date: 9/30/2011 3:49:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win. I remember this gem of you very well!

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/30/2011 2:18:00 PM

I really like this one Andrea. Great write Congratulations on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/30/2011 11:30:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on a fine first place win with these glorious words ..my friend..honored to share with u luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 9:54:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your 1st Place win in Brian's "Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Cory Long

Date: 9/30/2011 7:41:00 AM

this was very nice.. congrats on your win..cory

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/14/2011 4:39:00 PM

Andrea very well done haiku. my compliments on a creative poem. Anne

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 7:00:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Andrea. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 4/26/2011 7:42:00 PM

a great piece enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on My Journey Home. about what you said, no if i did that i would change the whole meaning of the poem, i don't know that much about syles of poetry. i just write them if i try to write a certain kind of poem i would do a very bad job. but thank you anyway.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Diane Locksley

Date: 4/25/2011 4:14:00 PM

I've heard that music holding a shell to my ear and it's beautiful just like this poem. Congratulations on your win Andrea. Best to you, Diane

Kyle Kyle

Date: 4/25/2011 10:51:00 AM

Nice k

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/25/2011 9:33:00 AM

Wonderful write Andrea . I watched a movie last night called Oceans. It was more of a documentary type of show but your poem reminds me that the ocean plays music all of it's own. love phyl

Jasmine Turner

Date: 4/24/2011 11:08:00 AM

very calming and thoughtful for a thing in such a little poem

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/24/2011 7:01:00 AM

beauty with matching whistles!... so well, done, andie! whooty congrats on the shining award! :) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/24/2011 5:35:00 AM

Very special poem, andrea. Just as Joe said, Concise and delicate. U are amazing! Gwendolen

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/23/2011 10:54:00 AM

I see you have had a win Andrea, i am not surprised this is a delicate concise poem, i am much rewarded by the read.

Peter Churchley

Date: 4/22/2011 11:00:00 AM

Very nice Haiku's, particulary to 2nd one

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/22/2011 10:40:00 AM

Many congrats Andrea on well desrved big win in Dr Rams contest with this creative piece. Happy easter. - Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2011 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Have a happy Easter with your family. Love, Carolyn