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The Sheen of Dawn

Pristine...moist canvas, Sparkling the light of the sun; Dewdrops glistering.

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/12/2009 7:30:00 AM

Hello Raul as usual, I enjoyed reading your beautiful Haiku. Ernilando

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 5/2/2009 10:37:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku !!

Tyler Martin

Date: 5/1/2009 6:14:00 PM

Love the last line and title.

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/1/2009 12:08:00 AM

A beautiful picture painted clearly in the mind. You will surely be blessed largely in life as you recognize the beauty and magic in the smallest of things. Awesome write my friend. Smiles from Lolita

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/30/2009 7:09:00 PM

Nice picture you painted ! Laura :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/30/2009 6:55:00 PM

I've been there! It's beautiful. Thank you for the lovely reminder. Nice haiku. D S-J

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/30/2009 3:50:00 PM

your imagination to do such creation is excellent-this is going to my favs my friend---charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2009 2:02:00 PM

We should all bow to the Haiku Master. Once again you evoke a beautiful, breathtaking image, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Brooke Mitchell

Date: 4/30/2009 12:21:00 PM

This is beautiful. Gracias for your comment! -Brooke

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/30/2009 11:23:00 AM

Dewdrops glistering...magical.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/30/2009 10:22:00 AM

Love this..love the title..BG