The Sheen of Dawn

Pristine...moist canvas,
Sparkling the light of the sun;
Dewdrops glistering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Tugaff Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Hello Raul as usual, I enjoyed reading your beautiful Haiku. Ernilando
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 10:37 AM
A beautiful Haiku !!
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 6:14 PM
Love the last line and title.
Townsend Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:08 AM
A beautiful picture painted clearly in the mind. You will surely be blessed largely in life as you recognize the beauty and magic in the smallest of things. Awesome write my friend. Smiles from Lolita
Mckenzie Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 7:09 PM
Nice picture you painted ! Laura :)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 6:55 PM
I've been there! It's beautiful. Thank you for the lovely reminder. Nice haiku. D S-J
Chircop Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 3:50 PM
your imagination to do such creation is excellent-this is going to my favs my friend---charma
Devonshire Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 2:02 PM
We should all bow to the Haiku Master. Once again you evoke a beautiful, breathtaking image, Raul! Love, Carolyn
Mitchell Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 12:21 PM
This is beautiful. Gracias for your comment! -Brooke
Higgins Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Dewdrops glistering...magical.
Gorelick Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Love this..love the title..BG
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