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The Shearing of An Ego

A man who'd crowned himself a vainglorious king, 'twas filled with foolish pride and never-ending need to be revered with loud praises, heard in echoes ring. Ego plowed the fields in his mind, planting that seed, and he cared not if bitter words made hearts bleed. Though smug notions danced in his swelled head, his smile withered; lips quivered as a teardrop fell, for he found himself lamentably, alone in his bed. Conceit was his pillow, to romance he'd bid farewell. In the depths of narcissism, he was bound to dwell. His inflated vanity kept everyone at arm's length. To be worshipped from afar, true love was never found until the night Delilah's whispers sheared his strength. Her love took his breath away until he nearly drowned in her eyes. Fallen off his pedestal, he was earthbound. No longer did he stride about like a cock-of-the-walk. His pompous attitude shattered into shards of glass, and his tongue stopped wagging with self-loving talk. A change of countenance made him a better man. Alas, he was reborn with humility by the kiss of a wee lass. His love for her had rendered soft his haughty ways, shearing away the wooly facade of his disdainful soul. A demeanor of meekness, his sentiment now displays, a nascent change, his ego defeated with self-control. He's admired by many; his modest virtues they extol. The hubris king stepped down from his lofty throne and became a man who was valued and respected. The only boasting he did was about a family of his own and was so well-liked that as mayor he was elected. A humble attitude altered his life, once 'twas corrected. July 4th, 2022 Ego shorn, here now reborn contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 7/15/2022 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 7/14/2022 8:41:00 PM
Exquisitely penned, as only you can, Jenna! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/5/2022 6:01:00 AM
Another splendid piece of poetry Jenna, with a moral for masters of the universe, if only they would be bothered to try some humble pie, but love of power, and praise on tap, is always their main course, but there are still the rare occasions when one may realise they are paying for the ego trip quite literally, and perhaps change their ways, I agree with the guys below, some brilliant metaphors here, and sure to do extremely well in the contest, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2022 2:51:00 PM
People who hunger for power and thirst to lord it over others disgust me. That's a bold thing to write, but it's true to my way of thinking. I'm grateful for your steadfast following of my poetry, David. Thanks so much for your supportive comments.
Date: 7/4/2022 7:31:00 PM
Excellente, my friend. Exceptionally well-crafted and written. Best wishes in Unseeking Seeker's contest. Looks like a sure winner to me!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2022 4:00:00 AM
I contemplate being sure about most things these days but thank you for the confidence you have in the merit of this one, Milt.
Date: 7/4/2022 11:57:00 AM
Great wisdom in this, Jenna - a lesson that many would do well to heed, myself included. I love the phrase "conceit was his pillow" as well as the subtle allusion in the line "Delilah's whispers sheared his strength". I'll have some of that chicken you're fixing for Jeff, with a side of humble pie.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/4/2022 1:10:00 PM
You, dear man, will never have to eat humble pie. You're welcome to join the feast and thank you for your gracious review. I liked the pillow line best, and I appreciate your insight on Delilah's part. ;)
Date: 7/4/2022 10:24:00 AM
Well done, winner, winner, chicken dinner there.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/4/2022 10:35:00 AM
Win or not, I'll cook you a feast of chicken for your support. Name your sides... Thanks, Jeff.

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