The Shape of Water

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water

28 June 2025- for the PICK A PENSEE 2 Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud


water
shapeless and mute
brings all within its milieu
transcending the differences
shaped by dry bigotries

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/3/2025 1:27:00 PM

Nice take on the theme John. Congratulations! :)

John Anderson
Date: 7/3/2025 1:55:00 PM

Thanks very much. All the best. Cheers!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2025 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Great to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

John Anderson
Date: 7/3/2025 1:13:00 PM

Thanks very much for your kind words. This is a favourite topic of mine as a pisces, and you can't get over that!