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The Shape of Water

Water in liquid form 
is shapeless; it flows and crashes 
like Bruce Lee once said.

          Impossible to shape by hand;
               though it mimics the shape
                    of what its poured into
                         be it a cup, a teapot, a bowl,
                              an ice tray, to name a few.

However, water in solid form,
frozen into ice below 
0 degrees centigrade,

          becomes whatever shape
               one wants it to be.
                    Some ice sculptures 
                         take the shape of castles,
                              animals; birds like owls

Water in the form of snow
is tantamount to wet clay 
in the palm of one's hand. 

           One could mould fallen snow 
                into a variety of shapes;
                     a ball, a bell, a triangle.
                          Isn't it amazing
                               how malleable water is?


Submitted for...
The Shape Of Water Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: craig cornish
Date written: 06/23/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Daniel Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Very nicely done, Edward:)
Pandit Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 5:13 AM
One of the best I have read on this theme. You gave it a shape we can all relate to, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 3:56 AM
You covered the topic perfectly. Splendid write. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Thank you so much, Rama:-)
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