The Shape of Water

At the font of her own misery she wept silently 
beneath a parapet sky of midnight blue  
Silver stars enmeshed and softened the water 
as she drew closer to the only venue of comfort 
she knew, ... 
Amongst the conference of moon's effulgence 
lay a quiet angel listening 
to the in and outs, of a sweet girl's breath 
A pear shaped tear fell on her pillowed cheek 
not a spark from the heavens could rouse her 
not a single whisper from Jala could end 
the sorrow that threatened to engulf her being ; 
At the brink of disaster a healing hand reached out 
softer then the caress of the breeze 
gentler then the brush of wings 
As she stood beneath the silver stars eyes glistening,  
she found the edge line of the water and giving it 
once last look, she embraced her fears and jumped..

June 23, 2021 
Contest Name: The Shape Of Water 
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! "she embraced her fears and jumped." So sad. A powerful write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
Andresen Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 2:17 PM
- Very well written, Vie Rose :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Skelly Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 1:26 AM
Bittersweet sadness guides the poem, Heartbreaking.....Delice
Poet Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Dear friend Rose, you have a profound meaning and excellent language, combined with wonderful symbolism. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 12:19 PM
This feels deep my friend--unique take on the contest theme. I'm impressed by the power of your vocabulary.
Rose  Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Thank you dear Vijay, when I write I let the spirit move me, and words are plucked from way back there, lol, I am sure you do that too, thank you for appreciate the trade and gift. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:31 AM
quite a sad poem. Suicides do not solve anything really. Nonetheless, the poem is full of imagery and beautiful to read. Hugs
Rose  Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Thank you dear Victor, so many young people feel helpless and out of choices, some we can reach some are too far gone . Thanks for reading.
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