The Shape of Water

Swoosh, she vacillates in malleable form
as ocean waves or garden hose splashes,
encapsulating life's nautical swarm
and keeping plants fresh with misty dashes.

In a cup, her shape is held gently in place,
until she quenches somebody's thirst.
Intimately, their insides she will trace,
where her cleansing powers become dispersed.

In a pool she permeates the shape of fun
as a backstroke and flutter kick silhouette.
Like diving board jumps, droplets reach for the sun,
impulsive in action, yet always wet.

From skyline heights, she arrives with a rush
as the carving force within ravines.
Sojourning between walls like an artist's brush,
she transforms herself as well as her scenes.


The Shape of Water Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
6-22-2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/16/2021 4:56:00 PM
Excellent! What an inventive poetic turn on water + its restorative, recreational touch. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:34:00 PM
oh this is a PERFECT entry to the contest. I would sure give a win to this one
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:19:00 AM
Superb entry for contest. Last line was really profound and true. All the best for contest
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Date: 6/23/2021 8:05:00 AM
Very beautifully imagined and expressed.
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