The Shape of Water

Having studied science as a subject I can say,
Water goes much the container way.
Dew drop-shape, tumbler-shape, pitcher-shape, 
Well-shape, stream-shape, river-shape, ocean-shape…
The shape of water and heart of water may resemble,
I imagine water in a pure crystal shape assemble.
Transparency! You can find from it a fallen needle,
Trouble it and you can fish out moralities evil.
The shape depends on the thirst it can quench,
And as per the dignity of the matter float or drench…
Shape floods; shape droughts; 
The shape makes many walk miles and loses heart…
The shape makes us smile, laugh and determines, 
The shape of the earth, heaven, and the cosmos…
Shapes make masters like Jesus proclaim louder:
 “If anyone gives even a cup of cold water…
That person will certainly not lose their reward…”
Just like a human heart shape can be soft or hard.
Discussions can go hotter till we finally utter:
Is shapelessness the real shape of water…?
Or going around and around and conclude:
Faith shaped, Hope shaped, Love shaped… 
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If ‘you’ and ‘I’ are water fed
Water is, then,  ‘we’ shaped.


22 June 2021
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations, Dear Poet. It's a brilliant poem - Brian is very right - well-deserved. Sending to my faves. BW ~ Mala
Nagarajan Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 11:20 PM
Nice one and congratulations
Pant Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 9:55 PM
Congratulations!! Well knitted words.Enjoyed it.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:34 PM
The shape makes many walk miles and loses heart… The shape makes us smile, laugh ..... You really covered shape in totality. Loved the lines quoted above. All the best for contest
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Thank you very much.
Kannan Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:22 PM
Beautifully said... Lovely take... And beautiful and perfect ending ...
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:40 PM
Thank you very much.
Roper Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:11 PM
You have filled the requirements on the shape of water, Christuraj. Good luck in the contest, not one I will try.Hugs Eve
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:40 PM
Thank you very much.
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