The Shape Of Water

Try to wrap your mind around a gust of wind, a rainbow, or the shape of water. Let your thoughts swim in a pool of imagination, diving into the depths of abstract; let it help you understand what defies definition. You can inhale a breath of air, and you can feel the wind on your face; but can you describe its shape? The wind, although tactile, is invisible; and it's constantly transforming itself. You can envision a rainbow across the sky; yet it's ethereal, without mass or weight. It's a magical illusion, composed of water and light, that only appears to be substantive. You can see, smell, feel, and taste water; even observe its transformation into clouds. But can you sculpt water; or describe it based on its shape? Our mind connects all the missing dots; to make sense of this phantasmagorical world, letting us contemplate the shape of water.

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Date: 6/27/2021 6:11:00 PM
A pleasure to read and thought provoking and still trying to connect many missing dots
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/28/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Edmund, we are all still connecting those dots, trying to make sense of our crazy world my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/24/2021 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2021 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/18/2021 9:54:00 AM
Exceptionally well-done, Emile. There are so many "magical illusions" in our daily experience. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem and wish you the best in Craig's contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/18/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Milt, our world is filled with wonder my friend, Emile.
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