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Mother's Christmas poinsettia apron

THE SHAPE OF HER LAUGHTER

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the fabric remembers her hands~ floured fingerprints on crimson petals, the knot at her waist pulled tight as she turned from the oven’s glow. heat curls the edges, fraying the green leaves where gravy once splattered~ a stain, a story. Mother wore it like armor~ against time, against hunger, against the silence of an empty kitchen. Now it hangs, a ghost of cinnamon and cloves, still holding the shape of her laughter.
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Hind Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 8:55 PM
I could feel it. <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:50 PM
awww, thank you, hugs, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Beautiful tribute ~ I felt the presence of both my mother and grand-mother as I read this. Thank you so much for sharing. Added to my FAVE's.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:51 PM
I'm delighted beyond measure that this poem brought you that connection. So cool. I'm grateful for your kind words and for the fave,
Achara Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 5:22 PM
Beautiful.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:50 PM
many thanks, Chetta, for your visit
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 5:04 PM
so touching poetry,, mothers are angels, wishes
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:50 PM
I agree...most mothers are angels wearing aprons.
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