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Forever feelings lost forever in the shadows of betrayal; He thought he was being clever, but coyness leaves a trail. Your heart really tries, yet trust has been wounded by the sting of lies and love can't resurrect it once it dies. A dark curtain descends blocking love's light, and you know things aren't right; for all you do lately is fight. There is no trace of truth whatsoever, reality begins to lift your veil; he is tone-deaf to your cries, and so, the locks are being changed tonight. (Fragmented Rhyme) 11/5/2018

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Date: 12/4/2021 7:48:00 AM
Your words are enriching. beautiful lines.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/4/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Oluseyi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/4/2018 5:38:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Emile very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination and the very sad emotions . Congratulations on your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/5/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/3/2018 4:40:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest, trust is everything ~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/4/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Constance, your new forms of poetry are a welcomed challenge my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/13/2018 1:21:00 PM
Change the locks -great wrap-up line, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/13/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2018 1:27:00 PM
Evocative stinging piece Emil! Good luck in the contest :) xomo (soup mail)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/5/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2018 10:06:00 AM
Beautifully done, Emile, as usual. And so sad, but true.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/5/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2018 9:03:00 AM
Lovely, Sad and true! Excellent
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