The Shadows All Around

Your shadow looms all around me
A reminder of what we were
The haunting chill of you
Follows me wherever I go
It's the quiet whisper of your voice
Not truly there
But not letting me go
Blocking out any light that could shine on me
Your dark lonely presence changes me
Making me a shadow of my former self
Drifting through existence
Darkening the doorways
Trying to reclaim my life
Instead, I am stuck in a land of shadows
Clinging to the outline of you
The darkened traces of what we were
The cold shadowing of what we had
The irrational hope that you'll come back
The fear that your shadow is all I'll ever have
And I'll be always trapped in it's cold lonely gloom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:07 PM
You really created a sense of gloom and doom here. Great atmospheric poem, brittney. thanks for stopping by mine.
Tyler Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Thanks. I had just gotten a text from someone right before I wrote this and his message just made me feel like I was there but wasn't really being seen. Like a shadow ..
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