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The Shadow of the Wind

We can't see the wind Even only its shadow With our naked eyes But we can feel its delights When it sweeps our body till we feel cool When the leaves wave When the clouds change their shapes But we can feel its furiosity When it pushes us hard till we can't stand still When the waves roar When the roofs fly off And maybe God is like the wind We can't see him But we can feel his presence through prayers But we can feel his love through prayers too And maybe the devil is like the wind too We can't see him But we can feel his presence Whenever we can't control our greeds And whenever we can't control our anger

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Date: 1/29/2023 7:30:00 PM
Dear Sai, the depth and breadth of your thoughtful poem is vividly portrayed through the brilliant use of analogy and imagery. Such a splendid piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Sai Lin Lip
Date: 1/30/2023 12:19:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/29/2023 6:25:00 PM
Oh, wow! Great metaphorical correlation
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Sai Lin Lip
Date: 1/30/2023 12:20:00 AM
Thank you.

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