The Shadow of a Cannonball

I am the shadow of a cannonball.
I watch bees float from flower to flower,
While beyond the back of the shed
The good work of anyone awaits my attention.

Though--I know now one thing!
Twinkling into my orbit now,
The lost dog on the great plains,
The quivering flame beside the feverish man,

The surfaceless bottom,
Like squirt gun chases
I proclaim through a breeze:

If my brother's fiancee's son
Needs wispy and wild advice
This I will provide
As the shadow shifts past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 6:17 PM
personification of what the shadow of a cannonball sees? I don't care if I'm right I love it.
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January 18, 2009 at 3:06 PM
I read and re- read but unfortunately, my perception of this piece has left me a little confused. Could be me... best regards and wishes on your writing, Lucinda
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