The Shadow Cast

The shadow cast was  so gigantic
My shadow small could not measure up
The feeble efforts__ my meager life
To gigantic shadow that was cast

Hard workin', energetic, gifts held
So that I could grow be giant oak
Strong sturdy solid gave your all__ life
Limbs were used to heat center of home

The leaves to mulch the flowers, roses
Acorns to the feed the squirrels, deer, wild life
But what a shadow across the yard
A shady place for one to sit and grow

Or sit close to your trunk to weather
The storms that come from time to time
How I miss that Oak that is now gone
Cut down removed used for heat

Hearth and home for several winters
So long ago but the __memories
Of the beauty as you lifted
You limbs in prayer and praise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/18/2010 3:03:00 AM
"The leaves to mulch the flowers, roses Acorns to the feed the squirrels, deer, wild life But what a shadow across the yard A shady place for one to sit and grow " this is really nice...really.
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Date: 5/10/2010 6:02:00 PM
Some things that need a little correction: Second stanza first line, Entergetic Third stanza second like, to the feed the squirrels Last line last stanza You limbs Sorry for that but i thought you would like such a great poem to be perfect, which it most certainly should be. This poem warmed my day more than you can think. It seems we can be warmed by things other than wooden limbs, like beautiful words and power of expression. Thank you for creating a new Favorite of mine Sara.
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Date: 5/9/2010 5:02:00 AM
If trees could speakl to us!!! I am mourning for every old tree felled by man or storm..Lovely poem, enjoyed reading it, Sara! Thank you again for your kind comments...Gert
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:45:00 PM
check the you in the last line, very nice poem. My large behind is small in the universal sense. HUH?
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Date: 5/8/2010 4:30:00 PM
great write
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Date: 5/7/2010 9:57:00 AM
Good Morning Sara, This poem is very expressive and says a lot of who you are. Thank you for your comment on one of my poems, it is good to hear from someone who is so gifted at writting poetry. Dennis Davis
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:56:00 AM
very nice write enjoyed have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 5/7/2010 5:53:00 AM
A vivid description of the oak tree .. they are indeed beautiful Sara and this is so well penned today.. enjoyed reading your creative write and thankxxx for your many kind and encouraging comments on my poetry and wins... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:43:00 PM
Nicely penned poem. I like it
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:19:00 PM
nice one enjoyed!
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