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The Shades of Clay

Time is trembling.
Among the many colors of clay,
and journeys.
Through life's caverns,
everyone is equal
with fervent longing.
And then there's the temptation.
The woodland is densely forested,
all the details
There are acceptable and prohibited options,
on the exposed line.
The truth has fallen.
To stretch,
near the source rivers,
and then to twist enough.
There was a loud whistling rustling.
Nobody loves it when it happens.
Discover tales that have been dispersed,
a lot of water
I inquired under the bridge.
And swept it away with its
suffocating muck. 
Poor habits, hanging norms.
On the tribe's backbone,
and the questions remain.
I'm torn between tears of answers and crush.
All the birds and butterflies.
Flying,
Is it just a fear of heights?
Or is it the fear of falling?
dwell inside us to crush us
I'm feeling guilt and absence.
Confine the space magnificently
to exclaim.
In the face of heinous wickedness.



1st place contest winner 

Written: August 8, 2021


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Kavanagh  Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Breathtaking imagery here Lasaad, I can sense the duality of emotion interlaced with nature, and you reinforce your place as a poet of depth here, not just going with the grain, but immersing yourself in and under it, bringing the reader with you too, cheers David
Poet Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 5:37 PM
Now that I know what you like, I'm delighted to see your excellent comment, David; your in-depth analysis precisely matches my feelings when I wrote it. Thank you so much for your compassion and support.
Skelly Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:06 AM
You have penned so many images Lasaad, all of them captivating...Delice
Poet Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Delice, your wonderful comment is so uplifting. Have a great evening
Buhagiar Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:50 AM
I agree with Harry. Ver in depth poetry. Imagery astounds. Your ending magnificent.
Poet Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Thank you so much Victor, your kind words are so motivating. Have a blessed day
Horsman Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:35 AM
Love this in-depth poetry.
Poet Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much Harry, your kind words are so much appreciated. Blessings
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