The Serpent

The serpent's evil doctrine he'd tried to inflict
Tore peaceful communities assunder; causing conflict
The ghost soldiers would come in the dead of night
Taking on the evil serpent with firepower and might.

They would infiltrate the serpent's lair and be in disguise
And unleash hit and run tactics with the element of surprise
This enraged the serpent who put a price on their head
And he would pray to his god of evil; wishing them all dead.

It was in the Middle East that the serpent came to light
Waged a killing spree thinking it was his god given right
All the ghost soldiers' had to do was follow the trail of the dead
Then corner the evil serpent and cut off its head.

Offsprings of the serpent are now starting to nourish
But our civilised world must ensure they don't flourish
All nations must come together and stop this pure evil
And stop innocent people from suffering unnecessary upheaval.

Our world would live in fear but for the ghost soldier's sacrifice
But to rid the world from evil someone pays a heavy price
Some of these ghost soldiers paid with their  lives
And would do it again to ensure; evil no longer thrives.


Written 24th February 2020.


Dedicated to the special forces of many nations who waged a behind the scenes war on ISIS in the Middle East. 
Their covert missions' helped bring about the end of the self proclaimed caliphate and freed many people who were slaves' to ISIS.
The caliphate is no more but the behind the scenes war continues to this day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/25/2022 4:54:00 AM
Evil has to be conquered somehow . In the fight against evil, sadly many lose their lives ! Those who fight to make other's life peaceful have to be remembered ever with gratitude. A beautiful tribute to the ghost soldiers!
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Date: 3/25/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, those brave men and women are a special breed, often putting themselves at great risk to stop evil in their tracks. Tom
Date: 2/28/2020 12:00:00 PM
Glory to the ghost soldiers. And may the serpent be cursed. Well said, tom
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Date: 2/28/2020 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, we should honour them and more than one day a year. Tom
Date: 2/26/2020 12:46:00 PM
On the mark, Brother Tom. A great poem, one that skeptics ought to read and re-read! Thanks, Gershon!
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Date: 2/26/2020 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, those scum hiding behind the banner of God. The atrocities they committed in his name, they should be burnt at the stake. Tom
Date: 2/26/2020 9:15:00 AM
Powerful and great write Tom. Makes our everyday problems dim in comparison. Bless our soldiers and ghost soldiers for their sacrifices. Hugs
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Date: 2/26/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Cecilia, some go to hell and back to keep us safe and to help contain the spread of evil. Tom
Date: 2/25/2020 1:08:00 PM
Evil must be confronted and God bless those special people who are willing to give their lives to do so. Thank you for putting your pen to work to give voice to these heroes.
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Date: 2/25/2020 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Kenneth, We see snippets on news report's but we never see the bigger picture, of the hellish conditions some of these brave men and women have to endure to keep our world safe. We salute them. Tom
Date: 2/24/2020 3:16:00 PM
Hello Tom! An excellent verse. I don't know how soldiers willingly give up their lives? Those who return are usually maimed for life. I can't even imagine the horrors they saw. They are spit on in San Francisco by paid protestors. You know me, Tom! I took these cowards on verbally. Punk-peaceniks! Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:08:00 AM
Can't believe some would disrespect those that keep us safe, maybe they'd rather be living under sharia law, they wouldnt have the freedom to protest then. Tom
Date: 2/24/2020 10:54:00 AM
Wow I love this poem Tom - yup, the serpent raise its evil head often in every culture creed and nation, whether poor or rich, all are susceptible, but only strength of character will help them with the right choice. Blessings Tom Jennifer.
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Date: 2/24/2020 2:50:00 PM
Thanks very much Jennifer, happy you enjoyed it, so many evil regimes seem to pop up out of nowhere, Sometimes I think governments are slow to act and then much later send in troops but by then they're well dug in and only covert missions by special forces gets them to loosen their grip. Tom
Date: 2/24/2020 9:25:00 AM
Great piece Tom, so excellently penned indeed. Have a great day,Gordon
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Date: 2/24/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Gordon, Thankfully that evil regime was crushed, but offshoots starting to emerge. Tom
Date: 2/24/2020 8:44:00 AM
"ghost soldiers" I like how you weave a story...entertaining...
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Date: 2/24/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, they gave ISIS a scare, they thought they were ghosts, in and out, didn't know they'd been until the drone left them some goodies. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 9:21:00 PM
Tom, your poem is powerfully and beautifully expressed. Thank God for the ghost soldiers and all the brave men and women in uniform that risk life and limb working to protect others' freedoms. We are so fortunate and this brilliant piece pays homage to their duty and the sacrifices made by our courageous soldiers. Great write! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/24/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Susan, welcome back, but for their sacrifices our world would be a much darker place. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 8:42:00 PM
even the ones who didn't lose their lives fighting this evil did lose it in a way, as they came back scarred for life, one way or another....sad that so much evil exists and our militaries must battle the demons... good write! hugs
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Date: 2/24/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Sandra, youre right, sadly some get affected by what they witness, Personally I don't think our government does enough to help them on their return from these hellish places. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 6:48:00 PM
When I think about the men and women sacrificing and those who have sacrificed their life for my freedom, I honestly get choked up with a lump in my throat. We as a nation/as a world will never be able to repay the debt we owe. Thank God for their bravery and courage. Stellar write Tom.
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Date: 2/24/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel, the hell and the horrors these brave men and women must see, you couldn't imagine it, my nephew was out there. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 6:22:00 PM
G'day Tom … the serpents weren't just evil. They are murders of the very worst kind instilling fear and slavery. I don't think our protectors get enough credit for their bravery - thank you Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 2/24/2020 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay, couldnt believe some of the things I read about. What God do these evil thugs believe in, beats me. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 5:38:00 PM
Brilliant write, Tom! God bless and protect all our forces. Bob H
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Date: 2/24/2020 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Bob, we should never forget the sacrifices they make for us. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 4:16:00 PM
They deserve our respect and gratitude--I agree with the sentiments of your poem. So well illustrated, Tom.
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Date: 2/23/2020 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Vijay, the horrors they must have witnessed doesn't bear thinking about, we salute them. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 2:12:00 PM
- "All nations must come together and stop this pure evil" ... before it kills every living being ... wooow, Tom ... a powerful and meaningful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2020 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Anne, even today our soldiers carry on the fight to keep us safe from these lunatics. Tom
Date: 2/23/2020 2:02:00 PM
It's always astonishing to think about the tremendous sacrifices of our military, Tom. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the "ghost soldiers." I love history and this is a fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/23/2020 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn, they risk their lives time after time, I don't think folk know how much they give sometimes, I know with regards to special forces it would have meant torture and death at the hands of these scum ISIS. Tom
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