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" END OF STRIFE " MY PHOTO, ©

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From, my age's snow-covered mountaintop, I discern into the horizon of my life the serene valley of welcoming death where ends all of humanity's strife! © Demetrios Trifiatis 25 June 2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/28/2020 6:05:00 AM

This poem shows the acceptance of age in the best way possible.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/26/2020 11:05:00 PM

one must have great faith such as this to walk without fear, knowing the reward will be worth all placed in our journey... wonderful write... hugs XoXo

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/26/2020 4:25:00 PM

Your heart knows...When more or less the last grain of sand will fall...

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/25/2020 7:47:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this quatrain. So succinctly put. You captured the serenity and peace that awaits us all when the time is right for us to die. Thank you, Demetrios... God Bless ... Shirley

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/26/2020 6:57:00 AM

Very glad you liked my little poem dear, Shirley. Thank you very much for your kind visit and comment.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/25/2020 11:14:00 AM

Yes Demetrios your extraordinary faith is shown here my friend. Genius metaphors that convey an impressive knowledge of scripture. Knowing full well the glory of heaven and the surrounding love from God. Arriving into a new and welcoming place of no strife. It's ironic most people fear death. When you know Gods words and where he prepares a place for you, you don't fear it but embrace it. Another favorite Demetrios. God Bless You...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2020 5:41:00 PM

You too kind my friend, Michael. I am touched by your appreciation. God bless you and keep you safe!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2020 6:54:00 AM

So true. It's a gentle breath of poetry - your words. God bless you my friend - Gina

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2020 7:36:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation dearest, Regina! You so kind. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2020 6:39:00 AM

That sounds so final--yet true for all mortals. Serene white rose!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2020 7:34:00 AM

Final? I do not think so my friend, Vijay! Who knows what our Lord has in store for our souls! Keep well. Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/25/2020 4:19:00 AM

After that lifetime journey the missing pieces of life's jigsaw are found and we see things clearer as the answers we've been searching for are in our grasp. It will be a time of great joy and nothing to fear. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2020 4:41:00 AM

Keep it secret, dear Tom! If we let the cat out of the bag, everyone would like to go there! hahaha! Thank you, my friend, for your precious visit! Blessings!