The Separation We Create

As unshaped as water, as filthy as streets, as hard as rocks:-
The separation we create
I remember our memories, I turn in pride 
I remember the days…, how we used to pass them by
I remember the times…, when you wouldn’t talk 
And I would drive the words out of you
I remember the plays, I remember that place
The place of where we acted, the place that played with life
I remember the jokes, I remember the silliness
I remember all pride
I remember the closeness, I remember the smiles
But I remember the jerkiness, I remember and ask why 
I look at the pride
I forget the memories, they’re all in line
I remember the thoughts, the separation of some filthy joke
Told by an unoriginal friend, as silly as snake, as separating as earth
I miss the memories, I miss them deep
None of this would happen if we just swallowed our pride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/28/2010 2:09:00 PM
omgg .. its soo emotionaal . ilove itt ! <3
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:17:00 AM
It's sad the things that happen when pride get's in the way! Wonderful Poem-I enjoyed reading it!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:16:00 AM
LOTS OF THOUGHTS 2 GO BY,, DeeP MEMORIES AND THOUGHTS, ENJOYED YOUR POEM.-SKAT
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