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The Separation We Create

As unshaped as water, as filthy as streets, as hard as rocks:- The separation we create I remember our memories, I turn in pride I remember the days…, how we used to pass them by I remember the times…, when you wouldn’t talk And I would drive the words out of you I remember the plays, I remember that place The place of where we acted, the place that played with life I remember the jokes, I remember the silliness I remember all pride I remember the closeness, I remember the smiles But I remember the jerkiness, I remember and ask why I look at the pride I forget the memories, they’re all in line I remember the thoughts, the separation of some filthy joke Told by an unoriginal friend, as silly as snake, as separating as earth I miss the memories, I miss them deep None of this would happen if we just swallowed our pride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 2:09:00 PM
omgg .. its soo emotionaal . ilove itt ! <3
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:17:00 AM
It's sad the things that happen when pride get's in the way! Wonderful Poem-I enjoyed reading it!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:16:00 AM
LOTS OF THOUGHTS 2 GO BY,, DeeP MEMORIES AND THOUGHTS, ENJOYED YOUR POEM.-SKAT
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