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The Sentinel

In times of need you are my guiding light.


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Monoku#10 sponsored by Poet Destroyer A
Placed 2nd

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Red Fiery

April 23, 2016 at 10:22 AM

Mesmerizing Monoku...!!!! Congratulations Paul for this brilliant work.. Hugs Red.

Paul Callus

April 23, 2016 at 2:49 PM

Many thanks for your awesome comments, Red:) Your encouragement and support are much appreciated:) hugs // paul

Jean Murray

April 7, 2016 at 1:44 PM

Beautiful Paul. A winner for sure!

Paul Callus

April 7, 2016 at 4:29 PM

Pleased that you like it, Jean...thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

April 2, 2016 at 3:16 PM

this was lovely, Paul. Congrats on your cool win.

Paul Callus

April 3, 2016 at 7:02 AM

Thank you Andrea. Have a nice day! // paul

Constance La France

April 2, 2016 at 11:58 AM

Paul, back to read this wonderful haiku once more ~

Paul Callus

April 2, 2016 at 2:44 PM

I appreciate double visits, Constance....it's a positive and encouraging sign...thank you:) ~ paul

Eve Roper

April 1, 2016 at 9:26 PM

Paul, a great verse! Congratulations on your win :-)

Paul Callus

April 2, 2016 at 2:43 PM

Thank you, Eve! Glad that you found this to your liking; all the best....paul

Charmaine Chircop

April 1, 2016 at 6:53 PM

You are so good at these monoku /Haiku etc. Btw-Started chapter four of your book toda y, love it. Its a miracle, Hubby wants to read it whenI finish it , am glad. : )

Paul Callus

April 2, 2016 at 2:51 PM

Many thanks, Charm! I am pleased that you're enjoying reading my book:) that's satisfaction for me; according to the publisher, it's about sold out. ~ Regards // paul

Lenny Gazbowski

April 1, 2016 at 8:00 AM

Excellent & Congrats !!!

Paul Callus

April 1, 2016 at 8:27 AM

Thank you, Lenny! Yours was also a very worthy winning entry! Regards // paul

Hansteven Selfa

April 1, 2016 at 7:59 AM

When you write Paul, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS

Paul Callus

April 1, 2016 at 8:25 AM

Your words of praise are appreciated, Hans! Thank you! ~ All the best. // paul

Stephen Pennell

April 1, 2016 at 6:10 AM

very to the point liking a lot congrats

Paul Callus

April 1, 2016 at 8:16 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, Stephen. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 1:55 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this thoughtful lovely write Paul..

Paul Callus

April 1, 2016 at 8:14 AM

Thank you Upma. I tried to keep it short and simple; glad you liked it:) Have a nice weekend! // paul

Bl Devnath

March 31, 2016 at 3:00 PM

A great congrats my lovely friend. It's philosophically done nicely. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 4:02 PM

Many thanks, BL:) Always a pleasure to read your comments! ~ Regards // paul

Joseph May

March 31, 2016 at 10:01 AM

Congratulations on a fine win Paul

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 10:52 AM

Thank you, Joseph; I enjoyed your winning entry, too! ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison

March 31, 2016 at 8:47 AM

Many congrats on your win Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 10:49 AM

Thank you, Jan; your support is always appreciated:) hugs // paul

Charlie Smith

March 31, 2016 at 6:57 AM

Great going Paul, congratulations...

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 10:47 AM

Thank you, Charlie! Have a nice day:) // paul

Susan Palli

March 31, 2016 at 4:31 AM

Excellent! Congrats. Well done.

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 10:31 AM

Your congrats & excellent comment are appreciated, Susan:) Thank you! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

March 31, 2016 at 3:26 AM

Congratulations on your top win with this beauty Paul. I love it! #7 ; )

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:48 AM

Thank you, Connie; your lovely comments and the 7 are much appreciated:) ~ Regards // paul

Teddy Kimathi

March 31, 2016 at 2:16 AM

Congrats Paul, for your top placement with this inspiring line!!! ;-)

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:41 AM

Thank you, Teddy; enjoyed your winning entry...you held your ground well:) ~ Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 12:50 AM

How funny, Paul. We are beside each other yet again, even though we sorta went different directions with this.

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:39 AM

Funny...and lovely, too, Timothy; I am always pleased to see you reaching deserved heights! Going different directions is what these picture contests are all about. Well done, my friend! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

March 31, 2016 at 12:26 AM

Hello Paul, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 8:41 AM

Thank you, Linda:) So pleased with my placement! You'll know by now that I have already visited your blog:) hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A

March 30, 2016 at 3:29 PM

thank you for entering my contest:)

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:35 AM

How could I not! :)

Constance La France

March 30, 2016 at 3:13 PM

Paul, terrific monoku, so much said in a few words. ..

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:34 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Constance:) I liked your winning entry, too! // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

March 29, 2016 at 11:51 PM

Excellent. Lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Best wishes for the contest.

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:33 AM

Thank you, Ravi. Glad that you found it to your liking:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 28, 2016 at 2:11 PM

- Lovely said, Paul - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 9:12 AM

Thank you Anne Lise:) Pleased that you enjoyed! hugs // paul

Timothy Hicks

March 28, 2016 at 12:56 AM

Oooh I really like this one. A haven from the storm (and the sentinel adds further thoughts as well). Always great with the monoku-portrait poems, Paul. Reaching out from the picture and yet still easily connecting us to what you see. Excellent.

Paul Callus

March 31, 2016 at 8:51 AM

I am pleased with you reaction, Timothy; you know me well:) I'm somewhat late in replying, still have a lot of catching up to do!! // paul