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The Sentinel

On the front line stands a man 
set
to give last breath

He walks in death’s dark shadow
brave
the sentinel

a keen watchman
fulfills solemn oath
who watches out for him?
~*~

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Jack Horne

April 1, 2013 at 10:20 AM

love this clever and deep write, my friend

Douglas Fulghum

April 1, 2013 at 6:07 AM

Having served my country, this poem hits home for me. For I have definitely walked in death's shadow. Not that an answer to the question is needed, but from my perspective, the sentries look out for each other, creating a bond that last a lifetime. Brothers. This is a great poem, I love it. Doug

Lucilla Carrillo

March 26, 2013 at 9:56 AM

This is a great write. Thanks for sharin g and for reading my poem. many blessings. Lucilla

Joseph May

March 25, 2013 at 4:42 PM

nice write Annalise...enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2013 at 2:38 PM

I love your question at the end there, Annalise. VERY thought provoking!

Timothy Hicks

March 24, 2013 at 10:00 AM

... and who watches the WATCHER'S watcher? It's a deadly cycle methinks... always someone is left unguarded. Very cool questionku... someday I will write one myself! And thanks for reading several of my poems yesterday... 'twas a delight to read them :)

Jack Ellison

March 24, 2013 at 6:53 AM

Where have you be'd dear Annalise... I have missed you! All's forgiven though after reading this sad, poignant essay! Love ya! Hugs, Jack xox

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 24, 2013 at 5:24 AM

- A bit sad, but well written Annalise! - Have a nice Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

March 24, 2013 at 4:29 AM

Very good Questionku by you Annalise.Love it.

Russell Sivey

March 23, 2013 at 10:42 PM

Wow, a very powerful write, sadness is written in the lines! Your Questionku is phenomenal! You have written a beautiful poem! What an enlightening piece, Great Work!!