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The Sentinel

Fog gathers-masked rocks

A sentinel poised above

Ever fixed light beams 





Contest:  "What My Eyes See"

Sponsored by, Annalise Brigham

Form: Haiku

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Joe Maverick

March 16, 2012 at 12:51 PM

Enjoyed reading your evocative lines Today Sharon..)

Sharon Ruebel

March 16, 2012 at 3:07 PM

Thank you for reading my little poem, glad you like it......As Always, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 11:06 AM

Congratulations Shar, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock

February 28, 2011 at 10:41 AM

The light houses are a wonder and I am in awe of the people who lived in them. Some of the pictures you see and the storms that have brewed around them are fantastic. One in particular where a helicopter is taking a picture and the guy closed the door before a gigantic wave hits . Wish I could remember where I seen that picture. Love the write. Phyl

George Aul

February 28, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest...George

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 4:19 PM

Great job Sharon, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems eighth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 4:04 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 1:11 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Sharon. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 12:10 PM

Wonderful Haiku here Shar!Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest---kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:38 AM

Hi again Shar :) really happy to see you among the winners with this wonderful haiku:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:42 AM

Super congrats Shar on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your sweet success and top ten win with luv.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with such a great talent as u luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:19 AM

A great visual treat.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2011 at 11:33 PM

way to go, Sharon. Congratulations in this contest.

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 10:08 PM

Very nice. Congratulations Sharon. Love, Joyce

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 10:07 PM

Very nice Sharon. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 9:00 PM

Congratulations on you 8th Place Win in my contest, Shar. And thank you for your kind support. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

February 25, 2011 at 5:47 AM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku this morn..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind comments on my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 24, 2011 at 5:26 PM

This is another very cool take on the photo, Shar :) enjoyed this one too, very unique ;) wish you the bets in the contest :)

Christopher Marcum

February 24, 2011 at 1:38 PM

Smile ~ Always a pleasure to view one of, "Your Splendours," lovely paintings my dear and hopefully, "Your Beauty," shall continue to bless us all with such here at Poe Soup ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

February 24, 2011 at 1:34 PM

Smile ~ I love the metaphor and symblance perhaps I believe that one may find amid this lovely reflection of what, "Your Beautiful Eyes," they do see ~ this guardian it seems watching over their charge of children and possibly fellow lights we shall say; albeit my own humbled reflections found within this brilliant canvas' colours of creation "My 'Dear, Precious & Beautiful Sharon Ruebel!!!'" ~ cont:)

Wilma Neels

February 24, 2011 at 11:06 AM

Quite a stunning piece of imagery Sharon, good luck to you for the contest with this gem ;-) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2011 at 9:06 AM

A breathtaking depiction of the photo for the contest Shar.. good luck my friend and thankxxx for your sweet and lovely comments.. if u can read my new blog posted today..explains much..luv.. thankxx...