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The Senset Danced

The tangerine sun has set in the western skies revealing to existence her maternal intuition. The eventide ascends before earth’s worn eyes leaving a silhouette of an artisan’s rendition. Mother Nature bows down to submission, she has been completely sagacious and wise. The twilit moon shines in the depths of obscurity, his finishing touch of nightfall holds a dim shadow. The falling stardust shines in simplistic purity as the constellations glorify their brilliant glow. For dusk knows things that no man could know holding onto all things of assurance and security. All the clouds are enigmatically full of divination, unfathomable to the core of the curious mind. Romance from goodbye kisses bring elation, for the closing of the night has been so kind. It is time to put the woes of the days behind, and say goodnight to God’s beautiful creation. July 17, 2018

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Date: 7/20/2018 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! An awesome poem. Imagery of night is so beautiful! :)
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:29:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your well written poem. The content and imagery is just beautiful. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/19/2018 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Nicely flowing poem on romantic nature.
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:17:00 AM
Exquisite write from your beautiful pen, sweet Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/18/2018 10:54:00 AM
many thanks Lyric! :)-luloo
Date: 7/17/2018 6:32:00 PM
Another beautiful poem from one of my favorite poets.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/18/2018 10:53:00 AM
you are always too sweet lovely Sunlite thank you :)-luloo
Date: 7/17/2018 2:32:00 PM
This to me is from a true poet's heart. Your imagery inspires me to new depths, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/18/2018 10:53:00 AM
aww thank you Sweet Caren :)-luloo
Date: 7/17/2018 9:36:00 AM
Whoa-WOW Laura Loo- THIS is Very beautiful poem ! You write lovely ^^ Thank you so much !!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/18/2018 10:53:00 AM
many thanks :)-luloo

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