The Seeking

13 February 2010

The Seeking
By: Noel N. Villarosa

Cinquain poem

Worries,
blaming oneself
for the ungrateful work
seeking a forgiveness to ease
the pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 1:53 PM
AHA! another one i had not seen yet. HEy, Noel, this would have worked nicely in the forgiveness contest! Maybe you can enter it if you haven't already. Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Good job on this one...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
Esquire Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Dear Noel, YOU are Quite well versed in YOUR Forms of POETRY Excellent Write I hope YOU really Don't feel this way and it is only POETIC License YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
Bourner Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:28 AM
i've felt this way too many times. i hope you feel better ------Ell
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