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The seeds of democracy

mine is the most beautiful ruined country on earth who's favorite sons held knives knife, wire ... tic tac .. mine is the most beautiful ruined country on earth but the landlords came with their good intentions and let the eagles get in ... even child knows what happens when you let the eagle get in white eagle tic tac ... wire, knife mine is the most beautiful ruined country on earth yet despite Geneva terms they proclaimed what happened 20 years ago as mislead estimation leaving us behind, unendingly hemorrhaging knife, wire ... vukovar, srebrenica how many of them are still out there

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Date: 8/12/2015 1:54:00 PM
i wish at times if i was the wind , i would have blown all tyranny, hate and war off..loved the thoughts you have a put on of a place i am thousands miles apart,,it gives a great way to think beyond and thank god for what we are , how we are and why we are.
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 8/18/2015 12:29:00 PM
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Date: 6/7/2015 4:40:00 AM
Sad that there can't be peace on earth.. It would be wonderful if wars would not happen..Someday there will be peace on earth..Enjoyed reading your work for it expresses a deep felt love and respect for the land in which you call home..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2015 4:38:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, and yes, that day of peace will come because we aren't creature of hate :)
Date: 6/4/2015 2:10:00 AM
sanja i relate entirely to your hearts words as my country suffered at the hands of invaders also bless you
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 6/4/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/4/2015 3:10:00 PM
A strong sentiment on damage suffered by your country. Do you like suggestions? I will make a few, and see if you agree: "my country is the most beautiful ruined country on the earth" may be better as "mine is the most beautiful ruined country on earth" "even child" did you mean "every child" ? "jet despite" did you mean to type "yet despite" ? "how many of them is still out there" should be "how many of them are still out there"
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 5/4/2015 3:24:00 PM
suggestions and corrections are welcome :))) thank you!