The Secret Whisper

Whisper to me little one
as the waves break on the shore
and brings the mysteries of the deep
with her haunting memories fore

Whisper to me little one
as the wind changes her pace
Her howling scream then silent still
keeps tortured cries encased

Whisper to me little one
of all lost grains of sand
ever seeking their way home
but scattered by human hands

Whisper to me little one
as the sun intensifies her heat
yet cannot melt with all her warmth
the coldness of defeat

Whisper to me little one
and do not feel aghast
Be not conspirator with this world
nor keeper of the past

Whisper to me little one
and share with me your fears
the secrets of your sufferings
the hidden controlled tears

Whisper to me little one
for unlike the wind and sea
I'll offer arms of comfort
and the words to set you free

Whisper to me little one
for each grain of sand is mine
thought lost none can destroy you
who was held by the Divine

Now hold on to me little one
as buried nightmares rise
and with distinctive form and shape
is revealed before your eyes

But as you look my little one
forget not that I say
"You're stronger, well learnt, and my love,
will ever guide the righteous way"...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/1/2012 5:12:00 PM
A wonderful piece, Diana, with sweetly flowing cadence and rhyme. The real beauty of this is in the sentiment you express. Well done!! Best wishes, Keith
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 5/10/2013 8:40:00 PM
Your kind comments is greatly appreciated Keith...Thank you...Love Diana
Date: 4/28/2012 12:21:00 PM
Wow!!Amazing!!Just love it!!
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/28/2012 1:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Kash!! I'm glad... Love Diana
Date: 4/22/2012 9:36:00 PM
WoW,,,, do you know how to put words down;} I love this !I wrote one titled " Whispers On The Wind" you have a blessed day ;}
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 12:42:00 PM
That's very kind of you Debbie, thanks... Love Diana
Date: 4/15/2012 1:41:00 PM
Another excellent piece from your fingertips. So enjoyed. Luv n hugs Michael
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 12:44:00 PM
I'm happy you enjoyed it Michael... Love Diana
Date: 4/15/2012 6:08:00 AM
very nicely done Diana....keep you ink flowing....always...Joseph
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 12:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph... Love Diana
Date: 4/15/2012 3:12:00 AM
Very well said and much thought put into this poem... Have a great day! JP
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Jim, I appreciate it... Love Diana
Date: 4/15/2012 12:59:00 AM
Diana, this is very deep. This makes me want to hold my little one real tight... A mothers arms are the best comfort... this is a very moving poem... I wish my little one would not have to suffer the uncomfort ways of the world and nightmares.... truly a wonderful poem..always..pd
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Destroyer Poet!!! You are right!!... Love Diana
Date: 4/14/2012 5:37:00 PM
I really like the little one in it...It's like a bedtime story.Very nice.. :o) But I still see the "I don't know"??? Aaaaaa! Your hiding it! :o)
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/14/2012 5:51:00 PM
Ha ha!! Funny Dan! Thanks for your comments.. Diana
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