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The Secret Waterfall

The secret waterfall was well hidden to reach it one had to pass behind the curtain of the fall that all knew about Then through a short passage that led to a beautiful lagoon hidden by the rocky towering cliffs Here the secret fall sang its song as it gayly flowed bouncing along just a pleasant gentle murmur As it joined the crystal clear waters a profusion of plants and flowers adorn the gentle sloping banks A natural sun trap this little valley colourful birds singing out their joy as they splash in your small pools Here at your feet is a sense of peace looking up to your source at the top I stand in stunned awe at your beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/19/2013 4:48:00 AM
It must have been bliss there, Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2013 7:42:00 AM
hi Ram ty Season's greetings to you and yours Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/19/2013 12:30:00 AM
The secret is out! This is so pretty.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/19/2013 8:20:00 AM
You as well Shadow, hugs back.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2013 7:41:00 AM
shhh lol it is in my mind Rick ty Season's greetings to you and yours Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/18/2013 11:54:00 PM
Very well captured Shadow, in fact as I was reading this I had a picture in my mind of a waterfall which I have been to, in Kings Park here in Perth, and it seemed as though you had been there yourself with this description it sounded exact, absolutely beautiful. Vera. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2013 7:40:00 AM
hi never been to Australia Vera this exists in my mind from a book I once read. Nice to hear you have somewhere like it to go to. Season's greetings to you and yours Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/18/2013 8:21:00 PM
This is so lovely......you take me away on a winter's day, to somewhere where the sun shines. Lovely!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2013 7:36:00 AM
hi Carrie season's greetings glad you enjoyed it ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/18/2013 4:21:00 PM
wow, beautiful serene write, Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/18/2013 5:13:00 PM
hi Jack ty so much Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/18/2013 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful piece Shadow with such a good feeling of serenity. enjoyed it very much. Thank you also for your comments Shadow and have a great holiday season.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/18/2013 1:43:00 PM
hi Vincent ty very much seasons greeting to you Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/18/2013 7:54:00 AM
THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL READING THANKS
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/18/2013 1:43:00 PM
hi Denise glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile hug

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