The Secret That Lies Inside [read Directly After Part 1]

look into her beautiful eyes, 
and focus on the painted pictures that surmise,
written in her skin and hair,
in her eyes, her voice is there, 
her voice it sings with rivers flow, 
the birds join in her soprano,
the trees and flowers start to dance, 
as wind carries it through the word in a trance,

like a nymph her dance is slow,
her feet bare except in the snow,
her body shimmering with the sun and moons glow,
dancing through the world to and fro,
do you hear her voice so sweet?
close your eyes, it will repeat,
the goddess of the earth is she,
a picture painted to watch over thee,

in her hair are sweet blooming flowers,
in her eyes are the rains showers, 
in her smile the sun is bright,
on her skin the moon shines at night,
a picture painted so gentle and calm,

both a thunder storm and a soft rain song,
the lightening strikes in her eyes, 
until taken by the calm nature does provide,
kill and take what does not belong, 
over exceed what you need, 
the goddess watches over thee,
watches over the forest, that belongs to she,

now look at me, look in my eyes,
the path i walk, god does provide, 
i leave none, to wander in the dark, 
speak to me, and the sun will spark,
do not steal the lives of many, 
for those that you do, are still my friends, 
i care and watch over the world,
i did not know it, but the earth,
is hidden away inside this girl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/28/2010 6:32:00 PM
A fine passionate poem well penned
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