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The Secret Storm

I forced a beaming smile and wished you well, but mirrors of the soul did not convey a corresponding look of happiness for both of you upon your wedding day. I’d loved you for so long but I for you was just a best friend’s sister, nothing more. You never once considered I could be that person you could cherish and adore. And when you introduced her at our home your tender words stung like a poisoned dart. Confetti kisses fuel and incite the secret storm which rages in my heart. 01/11/18 ‘Soap Opera Titles Poetry Contest’: Sponsored by: Janis Thompson

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Date: 11/3/2018 8:38:00 AM
great write. tells an entire story... and has us feeling. with not a wasted word :) good luck in the contest!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/6/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for your time and for such positive feedback,P.S
Date: 11/1/2018 2:32:00 PM
Very good Wendy. I enjoyed the story in this poem even if it was sad. best of luck in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/6/2018 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris. I seem to be on a melancholic 'run' at present!

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