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For my husband on our anniversary(he laughs in his sleep ;) <3 playing my ukulele and singing the first verse and chorus...
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The Secret Side of You

Vs.1)  One thing makes me so proud
To know that I know how
You si…ghh when you say My name. 
A treasure I hold tight 
To know when you sleep tonight
You'll la.. ugh, oh you'll never change. 

Chorus*
To know…the one I love
Like no...body else does
You sho…w me the real you, 
And I lo….o…ove,
The secret side of you…
All the sweet things only lovers get to do, 
Yess, I lo…ove, the secret side of you. 

Vs 2)   That look comes to your eyes
        As if you try to memorize
     Every li…ine, of my face. 
That shock of lightning fire
That look of desire
I can almost feel your embrace. 

Repeat Chorus*
Tag: yes, I lo…ove, the secret side of you.
All the sweet things only lovers get to do…
How I lo…ove, the secret side…of you. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/12/2024 1:48:00 PM
Your lyrics paint a vivid picture of a loving relationship, capturing the beauty of knowing and being known by someone special. Through its heartfelt imagery and lyrical language, the poem celebrates the magic of love and the joy of discovering the secret side of your husband.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/12/2024 3:50:00 PM
Appreciate the attention to detail and all of your thoughtful comments! Have a wonderful Sunday Silent One. Xo
Date: 5/10/2024 3:09:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/10/2024 7:23:00 AM
Tysm! I really like how this one turned out... appreciate the comment!

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