Marvin G. Celestial Poet Haiku

The Secret of Life

Traced undated thoughts
Conversed deepest life's questions
Ageless wit surmount

Mind traversed within
Whilst vibrant colors  made hue
Gently asked questions

Embraced each other
Radiating every facet
Life's truest secret.

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Samiha Zubair August 29, 2015 at 4:44 AM Nicely jotted down about life's secrets.

Kp Nunez November 15, 2014 at 2:22 AM Discovering life's truest secret means one has finally achieved wisdom. Congratulations if you did, humbly trying to get there, myself...This piece is great kabayan! New friend, Kim Patrice :) Marvin G. Celestial November 15, 2014 at 2:27 AM Yes my friend! I already found the only secret of life. One of the rich and famous here in our country asked me that question. She was delighted with my answer! Thanks for dropping by.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 4:16 AM - Marvin, a really well written Haiku - I like to write Haiku poems me too - Many think that it is an easy way to write poems on ..... but, I'm not agree - Thank you my friend - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 4:35 AM - True !!! :))) Marvin G. Celestial October 26, 2014 at 4:33 AM Yes Anne Lise. Many thought its simple but you need miles to travel before writing it. Thanks for dropping bye!

Liam Mcdaid October 2, 2014 at 7:03 AM beautiful vision painted Marvin G. Celestial October 2, 2014 at 10:46 AM Great thanks Liam!