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The Secret of Life

Traced undated thoughts Conversed deepest life's questions Ageless wit surmount Mind traversed within Whilst vibrant colors made hue Gently asked questions Embraced each other Radiating every facet Life's truest secret.

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Date: 8/29/2015 4:44:00 AM
Nicely jotted down about life's secrets.
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Date: 11/15/2014 2:22:00 AM
Discovering life's truest secret means one has finally achieved wisdom. Congratulations if you did, humbly trying to get there, myself...This piece is great kabayan! New friend, Kim Patrice :)
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marvin celestial
Date: 11/15/2014 2:27:00 AM
Yes my friend! I already found the only secret of life. One of the rich and famous here in our country asked me that question. She was delighted with my answer! Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 10/26/2014 4:16:00 AM
- Marvin, a really well written Haiku - I like to write Haiku poems me too - Many think that it is an easy way to write poems on ..... but, I'm not agree - Thank you my friend - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 10/26/2014 4:35:00 AM
- True !!! :)))
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marvin celestial
Date: 10/26/2014 4:33:00 AM
Yes Anne Lise. Many thought its simple but you need miles to travel before writing it. Thanks for dropping bye!
Date: 10/2/2014 2:30:00 PM
Nicely done, Marvin!
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marvin celestial
Date: 10/8/2014 12:05:00 AM
Great thanks my friend! Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 10/2/2014 7:03:00 AM
beautiful vision painted
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marvin celestial
Date: 10/2/2014 10:46:00 AM
Great thanks Liam!