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The Secret Lives of Chimney Pots Ii

Gazing down along the zealously
Monitored borders of well clipped
Evergreen Privet hedges.
Standing watchful guard over 
Divisions
Re-enforced by concrete posts and
Darkly stained, wooden, wavy-lap 
Fences;
Age-old neighbourly disputes, petty
Grudges and childish jealousies -
Ably demonstrated by various
Patchworks of shabbily constructed
And hastily planted defences!

Seated high in our remote eyries
We watch as your daily plays unfold -
Acquainting ourselves with all of 
Your intrigues, lies, gossip, and 
Countless deceits untold;
Out-of-mind witnesses to the 
Laudable,
Heart-warming, ridiculous, and 
Absurd;
And above it all:
Divulge we not...
For - "Mum is the word"!

We see the grimy white taxis 
Where, seated within, the
Unemployed ride.
We see the empty red buses which 
The young and pretty, 
Pigeon-speaking Polish girls drive.
We hear the insistent siren of the
Impatient ambulance,
Watch as the howling police 
Cars recklessly engage in their
Hot-pursuits -
The highways momentarily bathed
In the cold Glare
From baleful blue lamps
When ghoulishly flickering en route.

For across the crawling centuries
Of innovations and change
We have observed many 
Improvements
And inventions both marvelous and
Strange!
For now adorned about our 
Personage
With gleaming antenna and shinning
Metal dish,
And at the mere flick of a switch:
A conduit for overwhelming choice
Of consumption -
A portal to view every envisioned 
And desirable wish!

Behold! You have mastered the 
Electron -
It has become your most obedient
Slave!
Pictures beamed inside the
Electromagnetic spectrum,
And radios Skip Propagation 
Bounced of the Ionosphere
In the ingeniously cunning form
Of shortwave.
All hail to the computer,
The mobile phone, and T.V!
And be damned with the forgotten 
Art of conversation...
And old fuddy-duddy lines of 
Rhyming poetry.

For at times it does so seem to be,
From the viewpoint of an austere 
And venerable Pot,
That God is no longer required 
In your Grand Unified equation,
And has, therefore, been cancelled
Out,
Simplified - Conveniently forgot!
The great Immovable Mover -
The ultimate universal denominator,
Like a singularly embarrassing 
Mathematical point, 
Firstly disregarded - 
Then cynically dropped...
Replaced by a Hadron collider, and 
The notoriously elusive
Quantum particles it reputedly shot.

Indeed when overshadowed by 
Jagged spires and the holiest of 
Resonating domes
We latch upon every pious verse
Thrown down from occupied pulpits
In devout and ambiguous undertones.
For amid our abject 
Disappointments,
Mixed with our undisguised disdain,
Our minions record your every 
glossed over inaction
And each and every unsavoury 
Disregarded shame.
Distanced from the excesses of your
Unpalatable, self-indulgent creeds
We have resigned ourselves to the
Inevitable...
To which you all now seem readily 
Eager -
To greedily concede!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/26/2017 8:43:00 AM
I must say chimney pots are very snobbish as a whole. Think they are above us all. Harumph those sooty little syphons of hot air. I am enjoying this story. I wish I were young again and some one would read these poems to me as a bedtime story. Perhaps not sigh. Looking forward to tomorrows tale.
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John Fleming
Date: 8/31/2017 12:24:00 AM
Love your wonderful comments, Patricia...yes, you are spot on--they are snobbish and "sooty little syphons of hot air"! They believe themselves to be a cut above the rest. Cheers, Patricia! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/26/2017 8:55:00 AM
Reminds me of Roald Dhal.
Date: 10/26/2016 7:39:00 AM
So very nice. What great witnesses your chimney pots are, I love their eyrie. May they not though, disregard the importance of the internet on poetry. How our words now show all over the globe, to be read by a huge audience of like minded, a joy to be with, poets. Folk who appreciate reads like these.
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John Fleming
Date: 10/27/2016 3:28:00 AM
Hello again, Scott. Always nice to see you putting in an appearance...Hope you are healthy and happy! You are quite correct of course in your excellent point regarding the impact of the internet on poetry; and all other aspects of our daily lives. I often wonder what poets like Ezra Pound (Renowned for his editing and re-editing of not just his but also other peoples poetry) would have made of it all. The written word is now so much more dynamic: Instead of being fastened permanently to a page...It can be changed instantly! Many thanks, Scott...And my very best regards! :) john
Date: 10/1/2016 11:28:00 AM
It would be impossible John for me to find words to express the importance, the beauty, the depth, the love of Earth expressed in this piece. Brilliantly executed, a brilliant observation of our world today. A Huge Fav! Poems like this reinforce my love and hope for mankind. As always I feel guilty reading your work for free.
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John Fleming
Date: 10/16/2016 3:25:00 PM
Armand, as always, I really do value your opinions - They are much appreciated! I will go back to this trilogy one day...The venerable pots still have much to divulge! My very best regards...And my warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 3/11/2016 1:19:00 PM
I have had to learn and change with the times but I am not one who sends text messages or has a smart phone that is glued to my ear as I sadly see in all ages. You so masterly express our modern world. I think you would have thrived living a hundred years ago when sensibilities mattered and people cared about values more and greed less. I marvel at the command you have over the written word. Bravo! Trying to comment with my newly four yr. old g.daughter trying to fix my hair is challenging. #7
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John Fleming
Date: 3/12/2016 2:32:00 PM
You are most astute, Connie. At times I do think I was born out of my time. Not for any nostalgic or sentimental reason, although I confess there is a certain amount of truth in this, but more because I possess a strong feeling of association with these long gone days. I am very aware of any sort of atmosphere that I find prevalent in any manner of things...Particularly buildings and landscapes. A Tarot card reader once told me: "You are a powerful Empath - An out-of-control Healer"! Apparently I have the ability to both heal and destroy with mere words. This to my cost has been borne out to be true! I have had to burn quite a lot of my poetry for this very reason...So I intend to let the Meretrix say it for me - Lol! :) My most honest and worthy confidant...Your support cannot possibly be understated by me - not ever! Your good servant and friend always. :) J H Fleming.
Date: 3/11/2016 1:12:00 PM
This is wonderful John. Your wit had me shaking my head in agreement as I read. I too have conceded with having about three computers and a kindle, but I use them all mostly to read and comment on poetry. That is the one great thing about computters, it connects poets most everywhere in the world. Cont.
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Date: 3/12/2016 1:47:00 PM
Hello, Connie...my very good friend! Yes indeed home computers and the internet have made a massive impact on all of our lives. Instead of living a confined and rather insular existence we can, if we so choose, live as part of a greater world community. Something you and I could not possibly have envisioned even twenty years ago...never mind when we were just children. Truly staggering! The very fact you and I can converse the way we do over all these thousands of miles apart is testimony to this one great achievement. The internet is the worlds greatest invention - It is the worlds one Saviour! For anything that brings all peoples together, and keeps them talking, will surely one day bring us all to the same resolution: To exist side by side in harmonious tolerance. Till that glorious day my friend let us heed Oliver Cromwells words: "Put your trust in God...And keep your powder dry!" My most sincere regards to you, Connie. :) john

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