The Secret Admirer

I try to permeate your heart into my shadow 
The essence painted in silence, my solitude
Our laughter sent by heaven
Passing through the days, I dwell within the wonder

Once in a morning I sneak into your schedule
Being a stalker is not what I meant
But along with you are such an addiction 
Or should I call it as a new avocation? 

Sailing my admiration into your sparkling ocean 
I sail it deep through the land of your falling mist
Hiding behind the translucent veil  
You can only see the faint

I would not leave any clue
That my heart ever fall for you
Let me be selfish this time
I loved to be the secret admirer behind your shining stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/30/2013 7:45:00 PM
Good morning Yanny, I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/4/2013 4:59:00 PM
Good morning too Rick :D, how's life? :D
Date: 1/29/2013 6:44:00 PM
Very nice hon..Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/30/2013 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Debbie :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/28/2013 8:36:00 PM
Hello Yann,y awe... love the sail, and you shine for us here... sadly you will not give us a clue... love your poem...... enjoyed :-) always~PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 8:45:00 PM
Lindaaa :D hehe thank youu, sure i will not give a clue so that's why I call it the secret admirer hehehe, thank you for your great visit today, you really make my daay :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/28/2013 2:46:00 PM
reminds me of the song: the wings that lift him up! this is very romantic and beautiful.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, :D missing you here :D, wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/28/2013 1:34:00 PM
Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem today!! :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 4:41:00 PM
Thank you Pace :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/28/2013 7:20:00 AM
You never fail to amaze... beautiful write! Hugs, Jack xox
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 8:03:00 AM
Hello Jack, thank you for visiting, glad that you enjoyed it too :D wishing you a great day - hug, yanny
Date: 1/28/2013 5:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem Yanny, love Elizabeth
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth :D wishing you a great day - hug, yanny
Date: 1/28/2013 4:17:00 AM
.... Tell me your secret, Yanny .... - Another gem from you, beautifully written. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 6:56:00 AM
Yours are also precious Anne :), I always enjoyed to read the poems of you too :D as we all know, the secret is only write with heart :D hehe - hug, yanny
Date: 1/27/2013 10:07:00 PM
There is no secret that I am an admirer of your pen. I love the way you express your thoughts. You are truly one of a kind. Hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/28/2013 12:45:00 AM
Thank you Rick :D I'm a fan of yours too :D, so we are even now hehe :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/27/2013 9:02:00 PM
Had me grabbing my dictionary, thats something I like about poetry, to revive forgotten words and learn new ones, then a clear message is gleaned. Always nice to have a secret admirer but better yet when they are revealed and it is mutual, lovely share.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/27/2013 9:24:00 PM
Thank you Robert :D It's a pleasure to have a visit by you :), wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/27/2013 8:32:00 PM
nice write Yanny.... enjoyed reading your poem this morning....
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/27/2013 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Mehnaz :D
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