The Secret Admirer

I try to permeate your heart into my shadow 
The essence painted in silence, my solitude
Our laughter sent by heaven
Passing through the days, I dwell within the wonder

Once in a morning I sneak into your schedule
Being a stalker is not what I meant
But along with you are such an addiction 
Or should I call it as a new avocation? 

Sailing my admiration into your sparkling ocean 
I sail it deep through the land of your falling mist
Hiding behind the translucent veil  
You can only see the faint

I would not leave any clue
That my heart ever fall for you
Let me be selfish this time
I loved to be the secret admirer behind your shining stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Good morning Yanny, I hope you have a wonderful day.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Good morning too Rick :D, how's life? :D
Guzzi Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Very nice hon..Light & Love
Widjanarko Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Debbie :D - hug, yanny
A   Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Hello Yann,y awe... love the sail, and you shine for us here... sadly you will not give us a clue... love your poem...... enjoyed :-) always~PD
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Lindaaa :D hehe thank youu, sure i will not give a clue so that's why I call it the secret admirer hehehe, thank you for your great visit today, you really make my daay :D - hug, yanny
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 2:46 PM
reminds me of the song: the wings that lift him up! this is very romantic and beautiful.
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Andrea, :D missing you here :D, wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Ink-U-Script Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 1:34 PM
Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem today!! :)
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Thank you Pace :D - hug, yanny
Ellison Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 7:20 AM
You never fail to amaze... beautiful write! Hugs, Jack xox
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Hello Jack, thank you for visiting, glad that you enjoyed it too :D wishing you a great day - hug, yanny
O'Driscoll Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Beautiful poem Yanny, love Elizabeth
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Elizabeth :D wishing you a great day - hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 4:17 AM
.... Tell me your secret, Yanny .... - Another gem from you, beautifully written. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 6:56 AM
Yours are also precious Anne :), I always enjoyed to read the poems of you too :D as we all know, the secret is only write with heart :D hehe - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 10:07 PM
There is no secret that I am an admirer of your pen. I love the way you express your thoughts. You are truly one of a kind. Hugs Rick
Widjanarko Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 12:45 AM
Thank you Rick :D I'm a fan of yours too :D, so we are even now hehe :D - hug, yanny
Magnet Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Had me grabbing my dictionary, thats something I like about poetry, to revive forgotten words and learn new ones, then a clear message is gleaned. Always nice to have a secret admirer but better yet when they are revealed and it is mutual, lovely share.
Widjanarko Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 9:24 PM
Thank you Robert :D It's a pleasure to have a visit by you :), wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Veetil Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 8:32 PM
nice write Yanny.... enjoyed reading your poem this morning....
Widjanarko Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Thank you Mehnaz :D
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