The Secret

Once upon a time, thirty years ago,
In front of a priest I stood with my beau.
“Over time”, he hailed;
“The secret will be unveiled”,
“Of a truly happy marriage”; but I still don’t know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 24, 2010 at 6:35 PM
IN QUESTION, NICELY WRITTEN, ENJOYED
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May 24, 2010 at 3:24 PM
Very funny limerick, Nitish. Hope you don't have to wait much longer to find out the secret! Enjoyed the humor. Love, Carolyn
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May 24, 2010 at 7:10 AM
hahaha, a good little limerick ending. andrea
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Ignorance is sometime blissful
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