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The Secret

When every ounce of me life does not relish A breeze of hope strokes my anguish When a flash of fear crosses my sight A glimpse of light soothes my fright When a grain of grudge glides into my vein A pile of peace pumps pleasure into my pain When a drop of rage weakens my mind An ocean of faith spills into my insight The secret God.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/4/2018 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful... love this line: "A breeze of hope strokes my anguish"

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/5/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thank you so much M.L. Kiser for your visit and lovely feedback. My pleasure. Be blessed always.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2018 1:46:00 PM

This is lovely and meaningful, Besma. Hope and faith guarantee us a safe journey through life. God will see to it. ~ Sahha u xewqat sbieh. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/13/2018 4:05:00 PM

Faith soothes our worries and quietens our inner torment.. My pleasure Paul greeting an insightful poet as a reader! Grateful and blessed.

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2018 2:27:00 PM

Worry ends when faith begins.. God is always by your side...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/26/2018 3:11:00 PM

God is light.. peace.. love.. God has the answer to all our worries. Stay blessed and keep it up.