Robert A. Dufresne Poet Monorhyme

The Searchers

Looking for lunch in all the wrong places,
Unloved, hungry eyes set in introverted faces,
There’s spirit there but only traces,
Hunting for signs of love from all races,
God uses people to dispense His Graces.
Where am I among these human cases?
One small step may be the basis,
Of many far reaching paces.
...Dare I.. ?

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Zzzzz Zzzzz May 27, 2011 at 1:04 PM A poignant write and a poetic one too! Kind regards, Robert.

Wilma Neels April 17, 2011 at 11:07 AM Robert this is quite a profound write, weird that I am only reading it tonight..Hope your weekend's been a good one and the rest of your day will be full of smiles, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2011 at 11:36 AM How sad it is to look upon the world and see those hungry eyes, nearly devoid of spirit. I think God inspired you to write this poem and remind us that love exists in "all races." Great work, Rob! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk April 7, 2011 at 10:24 AM John Wayne made a movie with this same name, but a different story. this was a great write enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading the cellar door and for your comment, shep hated it when i brought him in the house, so he stayed out side by the cellar door or in the garage when it was cold.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 6, 2011 at 6:01 PM Definitely, dare! It is a win-win case. A really great write, Robert, thought provoking too. Thanks for the share. Be well! Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 6, 2011 at 8:57 AM I have enjoyed reading your creative writing today Robert. I hope you always find the inspiration to help you continue writing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 6, 2011 at 8:43 AM Ministering to others Robert is the greatest good one can do in life following the Lord and showing His Love to others.. a beautiful stellar write in perfect rhyme sequences luv.. please say my 'hi' to Taz and Mary luv.. hope they return to us here on P.S. ..

Dr.Ram Mehta April 6, 2011 at 8:29 AM Unforced monorhymes searching for diverse interests, Robert

Nette Onclaud April 6, 2011 at 8:19 AM feel-good piece, robert! my spiritual wings fly! :) huggs, nette

Harry Horsman April 6, 2011 at 6:05 AM Robert this is a awesome profound poem, full of feeling, it really say all about how the world seems to be full of lost souls. Harry