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one spends their whole life looking for a cause but have overlooked their ~self Alexis Y. 05/04/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/16/2021 9:54:00 AM

Alexis my wise friend, i sometimes feel I still haven't found myself. This is a thoroughly thought proving Monoko. Great write. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/6/2021 12:29:00 PM

Great observation. Back in the sixties and seventies people everywhere were trying to "FIIINND THEMSELVES". In truth they were looking for the thing they were meant for. Their own little nook where they could succeed and thus find fulfillment. Good job here. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 5/16/2021 9:51:00 AM

The sixties are famous for their 'Flower Power' - 'Make love not war' but maybe through all of this haze that they smoked, got through to the seventies without too much of a hitch. Your comment is also very observant Judy - in fact I love your answer!. Love and hugs, Jenny.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/5/2021 4:16:00 AM

Good Morning Alexis - This is a strong statement that has truth and much worth. It also serves as a reminder to live for oneself and to be happy with the present. Thank you for sharing.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/4/2021 6:44:00 PM

So true... A wise write Alexis

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/4/2021 10:20:00 AM

So they do, it’s true. Good Monoku Alexis… Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/4/2021 6:39:00 AM

Your monoku is always right on the dot. Well done.