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Flowing breathlessly on the sea my heart tries to unite you and I, until it falters and falls in a raging storm and can not find its love no more. Dancing gracefully in the field your heart strives to bond us together, yet it falters and falls in the tangling grass and can not find its love no more. Climbing swiftly up the mountain my heart seeks to grasp your hand in mine, then it falters and falls in the tumbling rocks and can not find its love no more. Floating silently through the clouds your heart longs to join us in unison, soon if falters and falls in the gusting wind and can not find its love no more. Yet hope always soars over the land calming the seas and taming the grass, crushing the rocks and hushing the wind so that someday, our hearts shall be one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 1:33:00 PM
Susanna,
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:40:00 PM
Well, I enjoyed it in March and here this wonderful writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Susanna.
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Susanna. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:10:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 3/19/2009 9:28:00 AM
Congrats Susanna on "The Search" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Well written Peace Fathima
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 4:02:00 PM
This is a nice write! congratulations on being featured this week, it is well deserved. Beautiful and touching. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:45:00 PM
Love the repetition in the last line of each stanza and how they tie back to the title. Wonderful writing here, Susanna!! Very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!
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