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The Seam Unseamed

once on the swing I noticed a seam in the sky it wasn't a dream because it been seen it unseamed everything unraveled even the swing and me I'll miss that swing

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Date: 1/14/2014 8:20:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem and the concise use of words in it.
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Eelun Phetmoore
Date: 1/15/2014 7:27:00 PM
Thank you very much David.

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