The Seam Unseamed

once on the swing I noticed a seam 
in the sky it wasn't a dream 
because it been seen it unseamed 
everything unraveled 
even the swing and me 
I'll miss that swing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fisher Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Enjoyed your poem and the concise use of words in it.
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January 15, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Thank you very much David.
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