Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

The Sea of Poesy

Find me lost in the sea of thought 
on wind-tossed waves of sunset hues,
floating around new ideas sought 
on rainbow ground, reflection ensues,
swimming with time, looking for beauty
on waters of rhyme, you'll find me.



19/01/17

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Debbie Duncan March 13, 2017 at 10:44 PM nicely done :)

Teddy Kimathi January 25, 2017 at 7:24 AM Deep, beautiful, and philosophical.... Congrats Jo, for your well-deserved 3rd placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Sandra Haight January 23, 2017 at 9:45 AM Lovely poem, Jo. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra

Afzal Nusker January 23, 2017 at 9:08 AM Every phrase of this poem is soaked in brilliance. Congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 23, 2017 at 6:38 AM six lines and you leave me in awe.. lovely write Jo, Congratulations! smiles, Olive Eloisa :)

Jean Murray January 22, 2017 at 2:59 PM Swimming with time...brimming with talent Jo. Congratulations.

Francis J Grasso January 22, 2017 at 9:07 AM I like this! Well done Jo! Congratulations on the win! ...Fran

Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2017 at 8:12 AM Lovely, Jo! Congrats!

Claudia Polydoro January 22, 2017 at 7:23 AM I loved it so very much Jo! congrats on your win :) hugs

CayCay Godwin January 21, 2017 at 12:01 AM You should put this in one of Brian Strand's short poem contests. It is a gem, loaded with beauty and depth - it is delightful, Jo! CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2017 at 6:48 AM Serenity shines through your words Jo. Beautiful! Hope you got to enter it. 7 ; )

Joseph May January 19, 2017 at 10:17 AM A beautiful Jo...best wishes

Charlie Smith January 19, 2017 at 9:19 AM Well done Jo...

Chris Green January 19, 2017 at 6:18 AM This was beautiful Jo. Sorry you missed the contest, this wonderful poem would have done well.

John Herlihy January 19, 2017 at 12:50 AM Yes, the creative process of writing poetry is every bit of that. Fantastic imagery to describe the indescribable. jH

Manoj Kumar January 19, 2017 at 12:36 AM Simple and beautiful..... I simply loved it Jo