The Sea of Life

the sea can lie calm
or thrash about with fervor
then swallow the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Jones Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 6:28 PM
In one fell swoop -- in one brief breath -- this poem captures the short longevity of life. Excellent, Ru. Von Jones
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Meru, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your wonderful Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 8:19 PM
wow, I love this personification. Congrats on the win
Groen Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Andrea, thanks so much, It is always a treat when you come by, Meru.
Bahr Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Great one. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Groen Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Kathy, I appreciate your comment.
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