The Sea Gypsy

Deep one night, in fitful sleep
there was I, among
bright night-flowers
and warm sea winds
of tropical ecstasy.

Along bright, tranquil ripples
and swaying purple leaves
she was there, tender at first
in the blue-green lagoon.

Her mythical beauty, stunning
but peculiar yellow eyes, ominous
study me mindfully,
in the light of the night-sun.

Slipping through the coolness
of the sea-pond, I reach
toward her, enveloped--
only she stabs at my soul, taking it,
leaving me to ponder
the warm horizon beyond the everglade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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March 24, 2026 at 12:37 PM
This has many cool components going on and it truly held me, I was absorbed. Some word parings tickled me just right. TRULY enjoyed. I can't help but tell you what I would want to be told, it is something I look for in my poems and then self-scold, you used the word 'bright' twice. Hope sharing that is all right.
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