The Sea

What is it about the sea and me?
The attraction is so strong.
I know I am 80% H2O, but U are 2.

Has it something to do with
the full moon?
Today I rescued star fish, crabs
and sea urchins.
Marooned on the sand.
The opposite of "Out of their depth."

That means tonight, as we speak....
It's high and deep.
Is it too late to go for a swim?
Please join me ...

LET'S JUMP IN!!

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Paul Callus

December 16, 2015 at 3:56 AM

I like your style of writing, Jean. It comes natural, fresh and tinged with humour. I also love the sea, being lucky enough to live 10mins away by car. Stopped swimming in Nov after a long summer starting in May! I am sure poetry has been a very effective remedy for you:) ~ All the best. // paul

Jean Murray

December 16, 2015 at 5:54 AM

Thank you Paul. My father owned a Music Shop, selling instruments. I remember as a child him coming into the house laughing. He said a German had just asked him for a book on how to learn music by ear. Likewise, there is no book I can buy to teach me how to write poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

November 20, 2015 at 7:10 PM

Your writing is really cool. Just like H2O! I bet I loved your old poems when you were here before!

Jean Murray

November 21, 2015 at 4:48 AM

You laughed your head off. My poems were more naughty then. I left a different website recently because my character was assassinated after posting an innocent little poem called CLITORIS. I have learned my lesson. I will try and behave here, although that is not easy for me and my mischievous mind. See if you can recognise who I an referring to from here in my next poem THE DRIVING INSTRUCTER

Andrea Dietrich

November 20, 2015 at 7:10 PM

so it looks like you have been here a few weeks. Did you go and take all your former poems down then? Let me read this first one you did when you came back.

Jean Murray

November 21, 2015 at 4:48 AM

Yes I did Andrea.

Skat A

November 17, 2015 at 10:29 PM

Jean:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin

November 16, 2015 at 10:16 AM

Charming stuff, Jean. Back to the sea from which we originated, plus a proposition maybe? Congrats, daver

Jean Murray

November 18, 2015 at 2:23 AM

I love a proposition !! Like Oscar Wilde I can resist anything except temptation. Thank you for your comment Daver.

Poet Destroyer A

November 8, 2015 at 1:10 PM

WOW, Jean a lovely write. I grew up with the ocean only 10 miles away from where I love. Nice write. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jean Murray

November 8, 2015 at 2:10 PM

Gosh, after a hard day in charge at work, it's lovely to hear positive, encouraging comments. I have decided to post one a day in the hope that even one person might like it. Poems are funny things. They are so personal yet we want to show them off.

Jean Murray

November 7, 2015 at 1:29 AM

I grew up by the sea and like to be close to the shoreline whenever I can. Music is in my blood as my father was a musician. I sing, play piano and accordion. Most of all I like to dance. I love to banter and enjoy a good laugh .My children are leaving the nest and I have loads of free time. I am a midwife and have worked part time since my first born. So, I am independent and like it that way. Thank you for this warm welcome SKAT. Training would do me no good. I write from the heart only.

Skat A

November 6, 2015 at 9:26 PM

Jean, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jean Murray

November 7, 2015 at 1:35 AM

I have replied above SKAT. I am still unfamiliar with the layout of this site. Thanks again. Jean

John Fleming

November 6, 2015 at 2:13 PM

I rather enjoyed your little poem, Jean. Nicely penned - My regards! :) john

Jean Murray

November 6, 2015 at 4:42 PM

My humble thanks John. It must be obvious I have no training whatsoever. If emotion counts, then this and those to follow are all from my heart and soul.

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